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Authors Note: Before you read this it might help to explain what the hell is going on. This is passed of one of my favourite Season 2 episodes of The Clone Wars. The episode is Landing At Point Rain and near the end Obi-Wan injured etc stands for the final fight but some bomber squad takes out all the geonosians. well this story his what would have happened if the reinforcments had never arrived and what i think would have made the story more AWSOME than it already is. Enough of my blabbering

Geonosian Troubles:
Chapter 1

Seeing all the explosions, flashes of light and troops falling to the ground dead was horrific, when they're your troops, the men who fight along side you, fight to their last breath for their generals. But he couldn't do anything about it. Not while he Obi-Wan Kenobi, general of the grand army of the Republic, Jedi Master and respected teacher was on the floor, unable to get up because he was injured, unable to stand without being in unimaginable pain. Around them the geonosian's were boxing them in, pushing each clone trooper back into the square and into a defensive circle. More flashes of light blinded Obi-Wan and explosions shattered his eardrums as he began to sense this would be their last stand, he pulled himself up of the dusty floor using the support of the crates that he sat against, and held in a scream as he pushed his body weight onto his now suspected broken leg, the pain shooting up through his spine.
"General Kenobi, you must rest" Cody stated over the battle that was increasingly becoming louder as the geonosian's came closer and closer.
"If I am to die, I would rather die fighting alongside my loyal troops and you Commander, than sitting down and waiting to be struck by a bomb," he said, still struggling to his feet and withdrawing his lightsaber from his belt. Another trooper fell as Obi-Wan ignited it, the blue crystal showing the fire in his eyes and yet the pain he felt as he stood, he sent a wave of the force to his broken leg to block the pain he was in. Then it began.
A large explosion ripped a large tank out of the way, spreading debris everywhere. From above geonosian's were flying everywhere, one carrying a trooper into the air whilst the trooper was screaming his head of. Obi-Wan began to run, slicing through each geonosian, each battle droid as he went, impaling them with his lightsaber as they came thick and fast. He headed for a tank and sliced his sabre through the floor, leaving a massive gap and letting it explode as soon as he had ran, the flames growing round them and blocking the droids way. Suddenly from behind a large tank opened fired.
"MOVE!" Obi-Wan called out to his troops nearest him as they dived aside, the blast pulverising the area they had been standing just seconds before. Cody lifted his head, his eyesight blurry from the smoke surrounding him like a blanket as he reached for his gun and shot at a droid who was coming straight for him. On the other side Obi-Wan struggled as he battled the droids and geonosian's, his injury making him slow and clumsy. Another explosion sent him flying to the floor, his face buried into the dusty ground, smoke encasing round him like a box as the battle became louder.
"General Kenobi" a voice sounded out through the endless amounts of smoke as Obi-Wan struggled to his feet.
"Cody where are you?" he shouted out through the smoke.
There was no answer. From behind him the sound of buzzing wings became more prominent and from out of nowhere through the smoke two geonosian's flew at him, giving him no time to react and destroy them. He felt their claws dig into his arms and lift him into the air, the wind blowing in his face. They came out of the smoke, where he saw the full extent of the battle, the fallen troops, the men who had fought so hard to keep each brother safe dead before him, the droids that kept coming and cries of pain that followed an explosion. It made him whimper in sadness and in pain.
"GENERAL!" A trooper shouted, firing up at the geonosian's who had their hold on him, digging their claws deeper into his flesh. Cody looked up and gestured to the troops to fire, the shots narrowly missing them, one shot hitting his broken leg making him cry out in pain. Obi-Wan felt a needle of some sort dig into his neck, the liquid running round his blood stream, the fire burning his heart. He watched as the troops continued to fire and his eyelids began to drop. He felt tired, very tired and as the geonosian's carried him through the battle he began to feel dizzy.
"Cody" he managed to say weakly before he passed out and saw no more.
Chapter 1 of Geonosian Troubles. Enjoy!
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Soresu1311917 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
I almost forgot about this one, it is the very first one I read of yours :) Now I am in a writing to finish another chapter:)
PurpleWillowTrees Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw :aww: 
I look forward to your next chapter! :D
RyanTheGreat777 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow...This IS better than the episode!
PurpleWillowTrees Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
woooo!!! thank you :glomp:
RyanTheGreat777 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
DraconicQueen Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Obi-wan is always getting into these situations. :D
PurpleWillowTrees Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i know. that what makes him awsome!
DraconicQueen Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Issake123 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
I really amazing, I really like this litlle chapter
Its interesting because you put drama on the story, and besides is so graphic that you can imagine it!!!!
PurpleWillowTrees Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanx :blush: i hope you will enjoy the next chapter:D
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